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posted May 27th, 2013, 5:30 pm


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May 27th, 2013, 5:33 pm

octokiss

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THIS TOOK ME A WHILE BUT I LIKE IT !!!!!
Fallon!!! Learning the local culture! good job, girl!
What happened to Franz's bike...

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May 27th, 2013, 9:59 pm

U.U b (Guest)

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I love the story so for everyone is so cool! I totally want to do some fanart :)

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May 28th, 2013, 1:27 am

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I bet franz got run over!
bike = in ruins
franz = not a mark!
we'll see small hints of his imperviousness over the next chapters but only later in the story will it be revealed that he is an ancient god, bent on protecting ronan. a person he sees as his last follower! if ronan loses faith in him, he will dissapear. at the same time, feanz has started to realise new things he calls "feels". at the library now he will find the word that will hunt his mind for the rest of the story: "LOVE"!
the end will be ronan holding franz in ripped clothes on the top of a mountain after an epic battle. in his dieing breath, franz will confess his feelings and ronan will realise that he feels the same.
ronan carefully removes franz glasses...
"ronan, I'm scared. I don't know what's going to happen to me"
"it's okay, franz. it'll all be okay..."
as ronan leans forward to franz we see a fading silhuette...

uh, AND THEN THEY LIVED HAPPILY EVER AFTER!! sorry if I gave away the main love story and ending haha ;D

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May 28th, 2013, 7:57 am

CrazyCane (Guest)

Scary period...

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@jonasfx: scary just scary

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May 28th, 2013, 8:00 am

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@U.U b: AHHH Thank you so much! Man, if you did fanart, I'd probably explode from happiness

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May 28th, 2013, 8:03 am

octokiss

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@jonasfx: this... this is.....
THIS IS BEAUTIFUL!!! I AM WIPING A TEAR AWAY FROM MY EYE... Noooo, Franz! You were the best secret ancient god ever!!!!!! SO MANY FEELS!!!!!!!

[and oddly parallel to the actual story... but i'm not telling which parts. you'll have to guess for yourself!!]

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May 29th, 2013, 2:55 am

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@octokiss: I've seen the potential in you and this comic B-) hehe

now I'm even more excited in seeing how this story shall develop :3

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May 31st, 2013, 2:27 pm

Hchano (Guest)

you made a mistake

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in panel 2's dialogue. you spelled 'LLLLLLLLADIES' wrong and also the bubble should indicate it's franz saying it.

you'rewelcome.

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